GenericKaneIV

Does the pace pick up at all? Enjoyable to read but very slow.

I’m looking forward to how the story plays out. Honestly interesting so far. I do hope for more chapters soon but either way thanks for the chapter!

Need more of the “MC”. Side stories and other perspectives are all well and good but there has been so little of the story centered around wilhelm that he’s just become an afterthought.

You’re story so far is great. Slow yes but enjoyable. Don’t doubt it and continue!!

I feel like he becomes a floor mat with his aunt sister and friends. It’s frustrating.

How old are they currently? I’ve lost track.

I gave your story a chance and enjoyed every chapter. I’m no professional but grammar and sentence structure has made reading a bit clunky at times but overall enjoyable. Looking forward to more!