gotcha. your Synopsis is too vague, might I suggest an Auxiliary Chapter or a chapter strictly intended for her training? it'd be useful to explore, it may be fun to see the various abilities she'd create when coming into contact with larger groups. I imagine her to be an extremely whimsical character who might create Magic Spells merely out of momentary inspiration. regarding Talent or Genius, it doesn't matter. if she wants fun, then let her have it! she's an Isekai Protagonist!
I need something explained pretty soon. what the heck is the magic system. there are Magicules, well as an Ultimate & Unique Skill, but what is this <<Shield>> & <<Cleave>>? that <<Rhongmyniad>>... what system are you imagining when writing this? because to me it seems she can just do them for no reason. did she create the magic?
I always had the thought that a Hero should be a guardian of those who are faithful. I also beleive that a Hero shouldn't have humanizing characteristics, but it's because a Hero has a humane side that makes them interesting. a Hero should be willing to judge beyond the system, knowing the difference between Valor & Justice, how to face Evil & protect the system with Wisdom. | My favorite Heroes in Fiction are Vash The Stampede, Batman, Spiderman. I fully understand what makes them Human, what gives them their heroic determination, because it's the same characteristics that if they acted how I imagine a Hero to truly be, that they'd begin to sacrifice their ideals. sacrificing Oneself for their ideals is different from sacrificing their ideals, even if it is in the same process of performing heroics. | I'm just speaking my mind here, so I'm not sure if others will understand my feelings correctly when they are put into words.
I really like Ryuu, so I vote yes for her. I think Rose is a pretty decent choice. I don't think Freya would go so well with her being the leader of another Familia, she'd be interested in MC, though. so, who really knows how she'd act? Freya is really possessive, but she's also wise. maybe Freya would remain an if, as in Syr probes MC's affairs, though I really don't think she'd be invested in MC as Bell. anyway, just make your choice(s) fun.
In this story I wanted to know about the love interests for our Elizabeth. I already have some in mind like the classic Aiz, Ryuu (one of my favorites), Freya and Riveria.
Danmachi - The Queen of Destruction
Anime & Comics · Merezinea
I like Ais, but it'd be a shame. when Bell gets introduced, it's his love for her that allows him to grow so powerful. Bell is the kind of guy that of he finds out Ais is already with somebody, Boy, Girl or God, he'd be willing to sacrifice his own desire so that Ais may live happily without worry. meaning he'd practically hypnotize himself into losing his most valuable ability, maybe moving onto someone else or giving up.
In this story I wanted to know about the love interests for our Elizabeth. I already have some in mind like the classic Aiz, Ryuu (one of my favorites), Freya and Riveria.
Danmachi - The Queen of Destruction
Anime & Comics · Merezinea
I hope we're gonna get a chill chapter between friends with as much attention that these chapters got. pretty good
these have been my thoughts on it for awhile now, he was left without a Father, Mother or Brother. left on a Planet of weaker, tail-less Monkeys. all in all, sounds pretty tough.
She believed that his constant blows to the head did not change his personality much, just erased his memories of his early childhood, which was very sad in a way, and maybe his 'wild' attitude before the blow was because he knew he was alone, not seeing his mother or father for a long time.
Dragon Ball: A Better Bulma
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
it was rewritten in Dragon Ball Super, that Kakarot left Planet Vageta with the same innocent, tame personality as his mother.
'Should I help the old man raise Goku? It would be better to have a more reasonable Goku, even if his innocence can never be taken away, he was born with it,' Bulma thought, remembering a few things.
Dragon Ball: A Better Bulma
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
she should be fine at the pace she's going, however I think she should aknowledge it as part of her Heroic Spirit nature that's able to grow like this, because I think her Skill that allows her to grow like this is too strange. a Heroic Spirit, even at its weakest, is way beyond the peak of Humanity. all their stats should be above the required level for the Dungeon, because even a fake like EMIYA & a half- like Mash have incredible stats. Bell's Liaris Freese Skill was considered broken OP in terms of the LN Author's perspective. her having something that it doesn't compare to makes her Skill way beyond OP. her Skills can allow her to have incredible Intuition & Instinct, but it shouldn't interfere with her Status Growth by giving a Bonus. I think her Status should be determined by innate Potential, Talent, Genius.
I have a strong sense of pain, but also am able to control my reaction to pain. I have a controlled tolerance, so of it's not something that would utterly disable me, I'd probably be able to withstand torture. as for willingly submitting to torture for someone else, that depends on a few things. did they catch the attention John Cramer, or were they unlucky enough to be a target by whim, and the perpetrator wants a playful, psychological torture alongside physical? my thoughts are, I'm willing to share someone's misfortune so long as it isn't a fate chosen by their own ill karma. ofcourse, this only goes for those closest to me, I don't even do donations, afterall.
Leon estimated that the boy had died a month ago, unable to withstand the torment, allowing him to take over. Over the past month, Leon came to understand the excruciating pain of these experiments. A mature mind could barely survive, let alone a child.
Marvel: My Sign-in System
Movies · GreekGreenGlass