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Calm_Dxwn
1 days ago
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I like the idea and the story is good so far but what makes it nearly unreadable for me is that the firstname and family name from saturo got swapped. Its not just in the beginning but also in the latest chapters his firstname is Saturo not Gojo. Gojo is his family/clan name so i would like to know if the author intends to fix it or not.

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Calm_Dxwn
13 days ago
Commented

I like the idea of your work but i dont think its gonna work the way you write this. There are too many crossover-ish things with too little one piece stuff. I mean you didnt state wich time we are, black beard suddenly doesnt have his crew mates from impel down, isnt an emperror and nobody seems to have a devil fruit. Further more this poseidon scepter thing is weird bcs its a item form pirats of the carribean and poseidon in onepice is a antique weapon in form of a human being. Like i said i like the idea and thats why i will continue the story in hope for more one piece and lesser disney pirat stuff.

With the Trident secured, Davy Jones and his crew began their ascent from the cavern, the weight of their conquest heavy in the depths of their minds. The future loomed with possibilities, and the path to their next challenge was clear. The Trident's acquisition was only the beginning, and its true potential would soon unfold as they continued their journey.

The Devil of the Sea

The Devil of the Sea

Anime & Comics · LT_Ryuu_X

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Calm_Dxwn
18 days ago
Commented

I think you are mixing up the one piece Blackbeard with the one from pirats of the carribean

The legend of Blackbeard was no more, and in its place, the legend of Davy Jones would only grow. But as the ship vanished into the mist, the captain knew that the cost of that legend was one he would bear alone.

The Devil of the Sea

The Devil of the Sea

Anime & Comics · LT_Ryuu_X

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Calm_Dxwn
18 days ago
Commented

Isnt his ship called sword of xebec or so

But now, that laughter faltered. Blackbeard's ship, the Queen Anne's Revenge, was a shattered ghost of its former self. The once-mighty crew lay defeated, their cries lost to the sea. The tendrils of darkness that Blackbeard commanded swirled around him, but they were weakening, dissipating into the air like smoke. Davy Jones's crew, loyal to their captain and fueled by their own grim fates, closed in, their weapons glinting in the dim light of the storm.

The Devil of the Sea

The Devil of the Sea

Anime & Comics · LT_Ryuu_X

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Calm_Dxwn
1 months ago
Commented

The Goat is back and he did not fail us with this wonderful chapter

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Calm_Dxwn
3 months ago
Commented

So far it is a really good story hope you keep up with it

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Calm_Dxwn
Calm_Dxwn
3 months ago
Commented

Author do you mean special or elite jonin bcs ind the next part it says kage level but special jonin are not kage level the elites are

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Calm_Dxwn
4 months ago
Commented

Good that you updated thought you dropped this masterpiece

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Calm_Dxwn
4 months ago
Replied to sapient

I guess Its the comic on wich its based not the show

"In an electrifying turn of events, a mesmerizing new figure has emerged, captivating the hearts and minds of people across the globe. Allow me to introduce Queen Maeve!!! The Amazonian Empress of the Other World, whose entrance onto the scene was nothing short of breathtaking! With an aura of mystery surrounding her, this enigmatic heroine has swiftly risen to become a beloved favorite among the adoring masses, leaving an indelible mark on the world!" A newswoman excitedly said while various images of a beautiful blond Amazonian flashed across the screen of the TV. 

The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!

The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!

Anime & Comics · Writing_Shirou

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Calm_Dxwn
6 months ago
Commented

+1

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