Arrest? Correct me if I’m wrong, isn’t this world stuffed to the brim with super powered adventurers or hunters? Even if Kendricks family aren’t hunters themselves, as a business empire they could easily afford under the table protection. And a family that already breaks the law, extorts, etc., they should have so many black market underground connections. How were they just “arrested?” No fight? No resistance? How?
Sam's eyes widened as he read the headlines blaring the news of Kendrick and his family's arrest for a litany of crimes. He scanned the details, his brow furrowing in surprise.
Video Games · Najicablitz626
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Gail pov: “oh no! My employee is harassing another one of MY employees? Whatever shall I do?!”
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I don’t want to agree, but I do. I could honestly use come more world building rather than relationship development. The humans live in fortress-like cities — so is the outer world beyond the city’s completely uninhabitable? How dangerous are the monsters out there? We know goblins exist, but goblins can’t be enough to force humans into military-state-like developments. And the whole developer thing — as much as I love the concept — how are developers just allowed to keep their crystals in their home? This is a power that grants power. A power that grants power limited only to the developer’s imagination and mana — how is the world not terrorist fueled? If developers can copy and print ammunition, skills, abilities — I mean a developer is a walking, breathing, human armory. The freedom granted to developers just strikes me as odd. The freedom in general strikes me as odd. That being said, I’m still happy with the story, gonna keep reading — I just hope maybe these are some thoughts we can think about.
Vice-Principle Mutsuki should be his ninja title in battle too
Naruto: Strength Through Teaching
Anime & Comics · ChaosNinja