It is not a great beginning, I have it very clear, but for the moment it is much better that the prologue is short and simple, instead of being complex.
I'm so sorry, I didn't know, my sincerest apologies
Two years had passed. Kiri and Haku had grown up quite a bit, Kiri was now twelve years old and Haku eight years old. Their relationship had improved a lot since they met, Haku had developed a very special feeling towards Kiri, it was not a feeling of friendship and much less brothers, it was a platonic feeling but at the same time it was confusing, was it love, joy, gratitude? He didn't know what it was, all he knew was that his life now belonged to Kiri, and if at any time Kiri asked him that he had to give his life in return... He did itit
Naruto: You too can be loved
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He is not gay, read on and there is clarity on his relationship
Two years had passed. Kiri and Haku had grown up quite a bit, Kiri was now twelve years old and Haku eight years old. Their relationship had improved a lot since they met, Haku had developed a very special feeling towards Kiri, it was not a feeling of friendship and much less brothers, it was a platonic feeling but at the same time it was confusing, was it love, joy, gratitude? He didn't know what it was, all he knew was that his life now belonged to Kiri, and if at any time Kiri asked him that he had to give his life in return... He did itit
Naruto: You too can be loved
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Que paso brother? porque tanto odio
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate that you are liking it, also sorry for the mistakes in the selection of words, I am from Colombia and English is not good for me to write but if I speak it, I will publish another chapter and take the rest of the dial to make a remastering to the other chapters. Thanks a lot.
Hebrew. It is a language that my grandfather learned in his childhood since he had to live in the capital of Israel, he assisted the Israel defense forces and I think he participated in a war called "The Six-Day War" my grandfather's battalion fought against the Egyptian air force and well... He retired from the army, met my grandmother who was a Colombian and they will get married and etc. I would equally love to serve in the defense forces just like my grandfather and that is why I am studying Hebrew with a private tutor.
Two. Spanish and english
Thank you so much! I'm improving my topography in English, believe me I'm good at speaking but bad at writing, I hope you forgive this Latin American from Colombia. Thank you very much for your support
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original Twilight: The Sin of Blood
Can we have second chances? Yes. Despite the acts he has committed? Yes. A murderer who was betrayed by his own family will experience all his sins in the world of Twilight; Love, betrayal, manipulation and murder. His will must remain firm to the end.3 Chs 105 คอลเลกชัน
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Naruto: You too can be loved
A Naruto fan is killed by a stray bullet, his last request decides to reincarnate in the world of his favorite animated series but being a descendant of the Yuki Clan... His wish is fulfilled, but in the future he will suffer being in that world that I dream so much. ... In future chapters I will ask you what kind of relationship you want with the characters I will show in the future8 Chs 286 คอลเลกชัน
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Naruto: You can be loved too
A Naruto fan is killed by a stray bullet, his last request decides to reincarnate in the world of his favorite animated series but being a descendant of the Yuki Clan... His wish is fulfilled, but in the future he will suffer being in that world that I dream so much.5 Chs 25 คอลเลกชัน
You're right, thank you very much for the correction, I promise it won't happen again
Twilight: The Sin of Blood
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