Honestly, this story feels like a Patreon bait. It starts strong to hook new readers but later stretches the plot with pointless elements and procrastination. And the worst part? This is a GOT fanfiction with the premise that the MC is a reincarnation of Solomon. Right? Well let's insert later in the story a OC who's going to have more protagonism than Jon Snow and Daenerys, seemingly favored by the author and like in total Sasuke and Bakugou fashion this character is a rude, ENTITLED annoyance!! I wouldn't mind the OC if the author wrote her to be likable, but no... she's just an angsty girl who ruins the moment whenever she opens her useless mouth. Anyways the plot advances like MOLASSES and 4 out of 5 chapter updates are pointless filler.
Because this story will be A LOT short if he does that...
But he couldn't bring himself to approach her. Not now. Not after everything.
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo
"You all think you have me trapped," he suddenly asked with a chuckle as the man beside her frowned.
Mahouka SI: The Yotsuba Prince (The Irregular at Magical Highschool SI
Anime & Comics · Drkest
Speaking about Stoic... Where the f*k is Jon Snow and Lyanna??
"Make sure that this is kept a secret. Appoint only the most stoic and loyal of your men to these crates. We shall take them back with us when we return," and Jon nodded.
The Burnt Prince-GOT SI
Book&Literature · Drkest
You WERE his mother but later on the PLOT demanded you to be another one of many HEROINES who will fall for that Victor guy...
"Tell me first," she started, her voice trembling more than she intended, "why… what is this? Why did you do it?" She grabbed his arm, lifting it just enough to reveal the faint blade marks still visible on his wrist. The pain in her heart was unbearable. "Lucian, why would you hurt yourself? Why didn't you come to me? I'm your mother…"
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo
Why am I hearing "Lullaby for a Princess" as background music??
"Lucian…" she whispered, her voice breaking as she gently touched his arm again, tears blurring her vision. "Why… why didn't I see this? How could I have let this happen to you?"
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo
Question: If Avey, his mother and sister are HEROINES in the Novel his current REALITY resides and he's barely a MOB (background) Character and the PLOT of that novel NUMB the feeling of the heroines to him because again he's just a mob character. Wouldn't that make Avey, his mom and sister completely innocent?? Especially in this rewind timeline when he got the ability to break them from the INFLUENCES of the Novel's Plot??
"My mother?" Lucian frowned, a strange sense of disbelief washing over him. Why now? In his last life, she'd barely acknowledged him, like he was invisible to her. Even when he tried to get her attention tried to be the son she might be proud of nothing had ever changed. But now, suddenly, she wanted to know where he was? It made no sense.
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo
I think this paragraph needs some editing cause it makes no sense... I had to read it like 3 times to understand that the scars of his suicide intent in his previous life are on his current body. I think...
I don't know... Killing yourself. Maybe??
"What the hell was that for?" Lucian asked, his voice tinged with both confusion and annoyance, his hand still rubbing his throbbing jaw. His body was tense, but his mind raced even faster. It wasn't the first time Jimmy had hit him, but this time, it felt different. It wasn't out of anger it was more like a release of pent-up emotion.
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo
Honestly I feel a little bit bad... I mean the Captain is a really chill character. Hell thanks to him the MC scores with a few girls in the game!! But again it's just a tiny bit bad.
It was Sara, Terry the Captain's wife. Her sparkling green eyes glimmered in the sunlight, and her sandy-blond hair framed her face, cascading just to her shoulders. The young woman exuded an undeniable charm, making it hard for Travis to look away.
Summertime Loving
Anime & Comics · deadpotential