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Why is it so hard to keep track of who is a woman and who is a man? Constantly seeing his and or him when it should be she or her, and vice versa!

Would have never thought a main character could be so cowardly! I really hope he grows a pair soon

What the hell ?!?!? Alec puts his head on Arthurs leg to go to sleep !?!?!?

So far, this is a great story line, please tell me that eventually the long messages after the chapter will stop and that space will be used to extend the length of the chapters ...

Great start can't wait to see where you are going with this plot

This is going to sound stupid but what the hell is this whole " haven't crossed the threshold yet" supposed to mean?

How is he the first there and first to board, yet when he gets on there are already students on the bus

And for those that said they would stop reading good Please stop and just leave, don't spread your poison to everyone else you sad entitled brats! It's the author s story not yours! Who are you to decide if the character is portrayed right or not!!!

To the person that made the original comment, so if I lost my pet in the middle of the Amazon rainforest and you don't know me yet are asked to save it by people who tried to slander you, while you have no real skills ,nothing but a friend that has some skills! Would you risk your life to save my pet???? Pretty sure everyone reading this knows you're blowing smoke out of your ass, I guess you are just petty enough to try to cause trouble to the author just because you're jealous of his ability to write better than you, especially since he came up with a character that's refreshingly honest!

Su Ping is really just the systems pet! Remember anything can be a pet. Think about it reward and punishment he is being trained by the system