Its pretty good
"I never said I was going to eat that. I'm sure their meat is tough. Plus, I've never heard in my life, someone raving about the moose they've eaten." I reply back.
Video Games · Eaglestriker_22
in almost all countrys (all that I know) any and all Ideas you have come up with are yours any storyline any caracter you made or even if the caracters was made by someone else if you use them in your story that story the way they acted everything is yours
Sorry if it came as a long rant but I'm still at a loss on how to deal with this properly as I've never thought this would happen to me :(
Anime & Comics · Ruruch
Pretty good story so far. actualy keeped going after the end of kronos a bit basic just hades with more powers and smarter that we have seen before.
Genjutsu Name: False order Description: Make the target think that they have diffrent orders then what they were given. Example 1: Original order was kill target A New order: kill target B Example 2: Original order was rescue squad A New order: silance squad A so they cant leak intel. think it would be fun and can be used on root agents, anbu of other villages and/or any subordinates. the genjutsu is subtle enough for it to be hard to know that you are in one
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Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
thank you for not going over all of my false and stupid opinions. and also dont worry about one bad review. also your novel will probably do very well as long as you keep it up as alot of simaly writen novels (style of writing) get pretty popular, its just not for me.
Thank you!
The author has never dated, so even writing a single romantic relationship will be challenging for me. All my knowledge of romance comes from other stories.
Anime & Comics · The_GOD_DUCK
The problem with a haram is that it is just for gooners. I have only read like 2 storys were the Harem worked. to make romance work and be a net plus for the story you need to write the mc partner like a character and not just an extra that many haram storys do if you are planing on just adding more partners just becase it will bring down the qualety of the story. TLDR: Dont
Also, I'd like your opinion on Mark having more than one lover. I'm not really into harem, but in a universe with so many prominent female characters, having two or three shouldn't hurt, I imagine.
Anime & Comics · The_GOD_DUCK
she is right that explanes everything
"It totally does."
Anime & Comics · Fanfics_0496
Please do and Give him a beard that is as big as him
I also had the idea for a fanfic where a man turns into a dwarf and travels the multiverse forging weapons for the protagonists. Imagine Goblin Slayer with an LMG—it's so cool.
Anime & Comics · The_GOD_DUCK
Yup
The Sword of Gryffindor.
Harry Potter: Becoming a Study God
Book&Literature · Lightreaper