because he is basically doing a full workout every time he walks when his body matures, his physique will already be good enough to make up for his weight, but that doesn't mean he'll be fast, just fast enough to be above average. as for whether he'll find ways to overcome his weaknesses, of course, he will, he can't stay the same for the entire story.
ch 0 2 Logan
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
it's not a resistance to the poisoning, the god literally made it so it was still there but would never kill him. and besides, the point of fanfiction is entertainment and taking away everything that made this story what it is wouldn't be all that entertaining. also who said that the adamantium would stay the same? but, the story hasn't reached that point yet so I won't delve into it however throughout the story, things change, circumstances change, and characters change.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
i wrote about it in the next chapter but it partially manifested itself to be similar to a mutant-type quirk and naturally, it was built into his body with the arm muscle tendons wolverines got. his skeleton grows alongside him like a normal skeleton, just a heavy, poisonous skeleton lol.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
No worries, he isn't going to be an edge lord any time soon.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
by the same logic, should quirks also not harm the user? if that's the case why is Dabi so burnt after overusing it? there are also plenty of mutant abilities in Marvel that have detrimental effects on their user.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
yeah. it's not really a quirk though, it explained later that it manifested itself to be like a quirk but it is functionally similar to an x-gene.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
don't worry, he won't be involved with the story at all anymore.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
yep, I do think you're right in this situation. in the future the mc will have an increase in strength but I agree that peter's intelligence is a crucial factor. in spite of this, however, I still think and know that having the ability will still be helpful since if the movies are anything to go by the body of whoever holds the spidey sense tends to react on their own a lot.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
i agree with you here. again, my ability as a writer is unpolished and mistakes like these are bound to happen. it is indeed not good to nerf the intelligence of a character for the sake of the story and I will try not to make these same mistakes again.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
the god already stated he had given resistance to the poisoning so as to not kill him. and exactly what makes you think that the spidey sense is any better in peter's hands than the mc's? the spidey-sense is exactly that. a sense. parkers brain is intelligence and when exactly has it been possible to consciously control a sense? the ability is just as useful in anyone's hands. as for your point about him being able to think but still being flustered, I don't think I have an argument for that. it was a mistake on my part due to my novice writing ability and I aspire to improve my writing as this story goes on, so I apologize for that.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
first off, it's called an endoskeleton, exo=eterior endo=interior. and the wheel is based on the abilities the main wolverine possessed meaning that since the wolverine possessed the adamantium skeleton and claws at the time, that was classified as an aspect of his abilities. as for the spider-sense, again it was an 'aspect' of his abilities that the mc could get, so he got it. and didn't you comment a bit ago about having to pay you to keep reading? I don't recall opening my wallet so why are you still here? again if you don't like what I write, you can go elsewhere whenever you want, though the fact that you are still here tells a different story.
ch 0 2 Logan
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
you're telling me that... the entire story concept... should be thrown out the window because I wanted to make the god part less boring? and the mc isn't stupid, he's a character who was just murdered and is suddenly being thrown into a situation like this, it's bound to jar any person. as for the nerfing, how exactly is this a nerf? he has a practically unbreakable skeleton with claws that can cut through any material the MHA world has to offer and that's not even mentioning the fact that he has the Spider-sense, a future predicting ability, which warns him of any possible danger. also, the god part isn't going to be a part of the story, he was just characterized as the god of evil to make it more interesting. and finally, you can stop reading whenever you want, if you don't like what I'm putting out, just move on.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
Yup.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
I could, but that would kinda ruin the point of the story which is him having separate smaller abilities from different heroes. of course, that doesn't mean he can't get stronger using those abilities. and I also just feel that giving him the whole powerset of wolverine and spiderman would be overkill since he'd be essentially unkillable then.
ch 0 1 Four Bullets, Three Wishes
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
he has the exact same adamantium skeleton as Wolverine, claws and all since the claws are also just bones stored in his forearm. as for the regeneration, no, he doesn't have that.
after a short time of spinning, it landed on my desired spot and I let out a relaxed sigh, seeing my plan come to fruition.
Anime & Comics · kridzrr
Evil mc good.....................................................................................................................................
MHA: A Game of Murder
Anime & Comics · Yriedvr