practicaloctopi

practicaloctopi

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practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Posted

have fun if you read it i personally hope that i can continue to write a great story and create a wonderful world filled with all sorts of oddities and tastes if you enjoy it then ill be happy

practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Commented

interesting name choice

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practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Commented

seems spooky so far

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practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Commented

oh future

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practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Replied to Rin_Nurnia

thank you very much

practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Posted

so far it seems to have a good foundation hopefully you expand upon it further in future chapters i think you had some good ideas in this [img=recommend]

practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Commented

i can tell where your taking this and its not my cup of tea but you do you

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Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

Fantasy · MooingNymph

practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Commented

this plot is a little strange to me

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Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

Fantasy · MooingNymph

practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Commented

a bit straight forward as a description for the memory surge also you didn't need to add the last bit

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Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse

Fantasy · MooingNymph

practicaloctopi
practicaloctopi
1 years ago
Posted

hi author review here hopefully you like the first chapter this is the second story ive written so please tell me what you like or dislike [img=recommend]