Nightshade9000

Power

''Talentless loser?'' He is an orphan at extreme disadvantage, your question is poorly constructed and chakra is the only reason that should make a difference in any choice in such a world

I don't know why the most liked reviews point to a shady view of this story, it might have been because the pacing or due to the character development being relatively slow to most of the progression fantasy stories that are running out there but this is the most realistic view point on the possibility of being reincarnated in Naruto world as an orphan. I was put off by the reviews when I saw this after 'The magical journey' (masterpiece that one) , maybe that is why I find myself being irritated for putting so much weight in previous reviews and also for starting another amazing journey before it was completed like magical journey.

It's a great story, original takes on characters, the world and most importantly a thrilling suspense in the background. Although the phrasing and grammar can use some improvements, it's in no way a disability for story comprehension and progress. Ah, yes the updating stability doesn't apply for this instance due to accident and rehabilitation but I hope to read more of this story. Hope you didn't get isekaied Lucifer09.

All the power ups, new characters and constructs are a good addition to the world of tensura but I think you have lost the sensibilities of fantasy that the canon Tensura has evoked and I fear it is getting farther away, before I elaborate on that it's necessary we discuss the crux of the story, the Lead character. (SPOILERS DOWN THERE !!!!!!!!!) For all the power that Silviana has amassed she has little mastery over it other than 'Morgan' being a mysterious benefactor and plot devices working to power her up through the initial arcs this doesn't necessarily have to be a bad or negative thing because for all I know you might be writing this in your free time. Yet the way Silviana thinks had little else to offer other than worrying about the future like a mundane being does, i.e to say not like a primordial force of time and paradox. (The elaboration*) Cultivation? Elevates perception and base human necessities Technology? It is the progeny of necessity, be it to enhance life or take it. Magic? It is the essence, the mystery that shows the potential to bend the world and also breaks the limitations of self. I do not ask for great feats of reasoning and presentation but somewhere in the story I find myself making the compromise of using discontinuous reasons and self serving emotional intelligence to settle for the Jumble of tricks that the story has become since the Falmuth war preparations. Do not misunderstand me for being anything other than dissatisfied and a bit observant of patterns in the details because if you do misunderstand, then you might not have anything to take away from 'this' which would not serve either of us. What I suggest is for a trait of consistency in behaviour and a holistic world which can serve the sensibilities of the power systems you might put in place inside of a story, anything else and I fear you might settle for less and personally I do not want to be stuck reading mighty writing put to sleep by lack of ambition or foresight. Also, Ainz was not represented well. I know that tempest had to win the battle against Orcs but with the reality bending shenanigans that I see in new chapters and other worldly fiction inspired magics, OVERLORD is no overlord at all if all the purpose he can serve is to pull the 'glorious notoriety of mass murder and evil scheming' - through mud.