Aether_10101

small personal criticism I unlocked the chapters up to chapter 59, and I find that the interactions between the Mc and FL are a bit emotionless. The same goes for the other characters. I don't know how to write a novel so I can't give advice but I will still make a little aside on this problem of lack of emotion, of humanity for the characters. Otherwise good job

I just started this story and after reading the first few chapters I immediately fell in love with the story. The two main characters are endearing and the story is interesting. Good job author, I hope this story doesn't get abandoned

I loved this novel good work author

I love this story. The novel has great potential. The author does a very good job. The only problem for me is the fear that this story will be abandoned. Let's hope that the author will manage to conclude his novel.

I decided to re-upload the review after reading more chapters. good novel a tragic beginning which creates empathy for the reader, endearing characters. But also excellent update stability. But I find this novel quite childish, the first chapter shows that the mc is a bit naive. It's weird because I'm used to cool, cruel, ruthless Mcs. As said in the other comment, there is a lot to improve. Ps English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes

new update. After following the author's advice to continue reading until chapter 50, The mc has really changed his personality!!!! Finally I can enjoy the story [img=recommend]

I like and I hooked on the plot of this story but I find the mc unbearable, irritable, stupid. I will trust the author and read till chapter 50 hoping the mc will change drastically.

I really like the story and I hope the author has not abandoned this novel. Hope he comes back in the near future