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winter_flake_
winter_flake_
6 days ago
Replied to Arthur_Els

I was just guessing besides when I meant Brandon being the first seat , I was expecting a future version of him coming and making the organization and stuff. time travel is quite common in extra genre.

No, he wasn't even an extra, knowing he was a transmigrator who took over Brandon Locke's body.

Extra's Descent

Extra's Descent

Fantasy · athex

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
1 months ago
Replied to Adamo_Amet

hey, is this version also going to have harem?? in my opinion please do so , don't listen to others yapping about no-harem , as they have mostly read stories where mc catches girls like pokemon , whereas in ur fics the mc develops his relationship with his potential lovers and not just poke-catch them , besides you are one of the best writers I know , and u excel when it comes to relationship and character development part ( have read the previous version and some of ur other works ). Anyway I will support the story, no matter the path u take. Best wishes from me and may u crack that important exam u went hiatus for.

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
1 months ago
Replied to swordzero

thanks

Today my friend got married. And to a cute girl, no less, so happy for my bro, hope he doesn't choose the hoes before the bros….

I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

Anime & Comics · BonVoyage

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
1 months ago
Replied to swordzero

wait really ?

Today my friend got married. And to a cute girl, no less, so happy for my bro, hope he doesn't choose the hoes before the bros….

I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

Anime & Comics · BonVoyage

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
1 months ago
Replied to Arthur_Els

Idk just thought so , if I have to say the thing which compelled me to think so then it would be - him having a system like raven - usually in most novels main antagonist should nearly be as special as protagonist to be a challenge.

No, he wasn't even an extra, knowing he was a transmigrator who took over Brandon Locke's body.

Extra's Descent

Extra's Descent

Fantasy · athex

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
1 months ago
Commented

Adding aika isn't beneficial, she's no beauty or anything and is basically just there , so let her be just there. For sona's peerage u can add her and maybe tsubaki , but not her entire peerage as they are just too weak and aren't special at all ( both power and lookwise ) , though I wouldn't recommend adding tsubaki and sona too ( he already has serafall , maybe tag sona along for some casual 3some ? nothing more). Focus more on the action , world building and alchemy aspect , besides in dxd there are tons of more interesting girls than aika , sona or tsubaki ( take griselda , gabriel , penemue , yasaka and beautiful vampires are there too - not adding grafyia as she is already added halfway) .

A/N: Btw, do you guys want more slice-of-life high school action? What about including Aika in the harem again? Or maybe putting at least a little focus on Sona's peerage? I would appreciate hearing your ideas.

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
2 months ago
Replied to xfinn

sauce ?

The wing seemed to home behind her as it wasn't directly attached to it.

Extra's Descent

Extra's Descent

Fantasy · athex

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
2 months ago
Commented

hey athex , why is the system shop not mentioned yet ? is it just there or will it be used eventually ??

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
3 months ago
Commented

Yeah....someone give him a therapist's number ...

Someone I know said it's peak, so I'll give it a try. Will leave a review here after I finish it.

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

Anime & Comics · Pastlives

winter_flake_
winter_flake_
3 months ago
Replied to RoseAmber

From 60 or so chapters of this fic present on fanfiction.net ( it's still ongoing there ) only 7 to 8 chapters have been covered here .