Blue_Phoenix_9982

Blue_Phoenix_9982

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2022-07-28 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
5 days ago
Posted

its good but you should change the name of the fic I get the mc doesn't have to be exactly like the real character but at least it should be close to the original since he is not just evil then you should name it like "In marvel with decay" not "Shigaraki in marvel".

Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

He needs taijutsu or he is going to die that's why most ninja have at least some practice in taijutsu and i mean technique not raw power.

Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

It was a perfect time for kyoka suigetsu.

Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

He would have to desire to be immortal for that to happen. Why would he want that it would waste the wish he made?

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Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

why not just use pure chakra so it is invisible?

The thing about my chakra version of Cleave is that its different from the one in JJK. I couldn't make it invisible for one because that is not how chakra works. Its not cursed energy or a cursed technique.

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Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

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Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

Keep it up i like this version of deku alot.

Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

Most writing styles are like that.

Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

The mc is not my cup of tea but this looks good keep going!

Blue_Phoenix_9982
Blue_Phoenix_9982
2 months ago
Commented

If he has all talent couldn't he just drawn manga or have a business talent?

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