This is a review when the book is at its early days. Writing quality, 4 stars. I took away one star because in chapter two, I felt like the dialogues were very sharp, but not in overall. Story development, five stars because there wasn't deliberate words dragging over a single scene, events are well sequenced and related to one another. Honestly I feel this is where the author expertises, considering this is her first work. If she could emphasize on putting more effort towards story development, her talent would be pronounced. Character design, two stars. I couldn't understand the goals of the characters, their motivations and they lack distinctive mannerisms. Update stability, five stars because it can vary. World background, three stars. As said, story development is the author's main strength. The world background... Well places were mentioned. I hope this is helpful.
F*ck....
It seemed the days of peace were slipping away.
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
What's wrong with this Princess? She didn't want to be captured by a handsome dude? I thought that's what she wanted, so why the panic?
She looked around; there was nothing she could use to break through.
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
What a disappointed you are
"I'd rather save myself," he said, transforming into his ogre form and breaking out the window.
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
damn
Angelina turned, jaw dropped, as a handsome stranger stood tall. He had dark eyes,sharp jawline,doe eyes ,thin lips and perfectly shaped eyebrows. He was...breath taking .
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
😂😂😂
"I am in opposition."
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
For an Ogre, he's handsome
...her eyes fell on the ogre, Ramiel. He looked human, but his features repulsed her. His nose was flat, and his ears were slightly pointed. He had thick, black eyebrows and piercing red eyes.
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
Yes of course 😂for peace and unity 😂
"You still want me to marry that ugly freak!" She sat up, leaning her head on the headboard.
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
Yeah. Thanks for the chapter
Angelina felt herself running through the woods, all the trees in the woods had no leaves, the ground beneath her was clothed with ash and bones. She was running from something, what it was, she didn't know. Soon, she reached a dead end, her breathing became heavy as she felt strong energy sweep her off the ground. "Ahh!" She screamed back to life, her hand on her chest, feeling her heart beat. Surprise washed over her as she took in her surroundings. This was her room, how was she back here when she was leagues away from Arcadia yesterday.
The devil's Angel:an angel's heart, the devil's Desire
Fantasy · Loe_Ells_2
Nice work, but requires some polishing. 🫰 Keep the passion burning, future great author
EDEN'S Impact : Reckoning of the Shadows
Games · McFoster