Oh and a hug from Brazil, I love Argentina, a very beautiful country.
Well, I can only say that I'm already creating expectations for this work, please don't be like other writers who create something cool only to abandon the project after a while. Do you plan to write these other stories after you finish this one or while you're writing?
I see. Well, regarding your first question, I believe it won't unbalance the power balance of Mushoku Tensei, because he will literally have to fight against gods.As for your second question, I can't help with that since I don't speak English, I only speak Portuguese which is my native language, but from what I could tell from the app's translator everything is fine, It didn't seem like anything was wrong to me.
One question, why make him with so little knowledge about the work? His master leaves basically at the beginning of the anime, he basically has no advantage in terms of knowledge.
One question, why don't you increase the rate of quests he receives? I think he's too weak, don't you want to make him strong too quickly?
What there was?
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What do you hear with the other chapters?
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It's really a shame, I hope one day you'll come back to writing.
Author, please try to bring more chapters of this work more frequently.
Also, I never thought something like this would have ever happened, but, even if for a single second, my Martial Peak fanfic was ranked second! (Image here for those who don't believe it!)
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I have a suggestion, I don't know if this is in the original work, but you could make him go to a knight school to learn fencing, just like there is a magic school, I think it would make sense. Another suggestion is to make him become an adventurer, it would be cool to see him adventuring around the world.
Mushoku Tensei : the sword of illusion
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