Karito_

Karito_

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Never let yourself bleed...

2022-07-01 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Karito_
Karito_
2 months ago
Replied to Donagha

I couldnt continue the current plot. So Im scrapping it and using a different character.

Karito_
Karito_
2 months ago
Posted

Yello. I'm Karito. Check out my novel. Give feedback. I usually post Sundays since its the only day I actually have time to write. So relax and enjoy the chapters once a week.

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Karito_
Karito_
3 months ago
Commented

You know what would be interesting to see. If in a scenario where Rosaline is hurt, and Jasper is around, you can make Jasper go pale. Everyone around would ask whats wrong, and Jasper would say, that normally, he would barely feel any emotions from Gabriel, but now all he feels is rage. Like an amount he's never ever seen before. You can play around with this idea if you wish. Great story up till now

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Karito_
Karito_
4 months ago
Replied to Dhaliwal2

Why though? Whats the point of de-ageing for an hour?

Karito_
Karito_
8 months ago
Replied to Quin_Bland

Give me some slack guys, I'm an idiot.

"Anyway," Master Pakku said. "I was just on my way to meet with Chief Arnook about some important Water Tribe matters. Would you care to join me?"

ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope

ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope

Anime & Comics · Karito_

Karito_
Karito_
1 years ago
Commented

Brother give it another shot. Dont worry about the break. I dont know about you but I got kind of lazy and couldn't find the inspiration to continue.

Karito_
Karito_
1 years ago
Commented

wait did he kiss her on her cheek or hair?

Karito_
Karito_
1 years ago
Replied to The_reader_ofnovel

He's trying to keep Toph far away from Zuko. The offence its self isn't that wrong. Just an overprotective father.

"Vanish. Disappear without a trace." Lao Beifong leaned forward on his desk, his eyes cold and calculating. "You can a have a ship and a crew. However I want you gone by the end of the day. You will leave this town and never return, and in exchange, you will not suffer the consequences of your actions. It is a fair deal, is it not?"

ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope

ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope

Anime & Comics · Karito_

Karito_
Karito_
1 years ago
Posted

Hey guys, shameless author here to give himself a good review. This a different version of ATLA as my previous one ended as a failure. Hope you enjoy...

Karito_
Karito_
1 years ago
Replied to Donagha

thx

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ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope

ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope

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