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what's this? a heart to heart conversation? a talk no jutsu, even? from Naruto? it can't be. Boruto's dad would never do that

"sales and marketing strategies were..." What's with this gpt written nonsense? Why are you making the MC a business mogul now? when did he have time to do this in between his training sessions to reach quasi kage at 13 or whatever? Get on with the plot already. You're 50 chapters in, and you've not done anything but expand on Hyuga organisation a bit.

Fujin: I came here to get paid and smack fools... and you're all outta money

MC: sees 8 year old girl Passionfruit starts playing

please don't break the fourth wall "As we will see now," I'm reading a novel, not a mathematical proof

"I fricking hate you, Rasa!" ... If you don't want to use profanities.... don't... Way to kill any immersion. Honestly, there's a lot wrong with this chapter. Why wouldn't Tsunade fight against puppets? Sasori is the one enemy she's equipped to battle currently. The MC senses a force of 1000 ninjas heading his way and doesn't alert his allies? No traps? No prepared seals? He deserves to die. Not for abandoning his allies, but for being stupid. How can you have a reincarnator's special skill be explosive shadow clones? Can you be more boring? And even then, you don't use explosives properly. And your use of seals... abysmal. Tenten had more imagination than you. A barrier? A durability buff? The MC could realistically pull out a lake of water from a scroll to deal with Magnet release, a chakra disturbance array to deal with chakra strings, a yin seal like Tsunade's for stored chakra, seals on his sword that make it cut through jutsus or make it fly back like Mjolnir. If you really wanted to awaken his chains through an emotional moment, why not actually injure Anko or Kakashi? Why would you give us this worthless moment where the MC's starts whining. "I fricking hate you, Raasa!" How am I supposed to respect this guy?

you guys actually like Boruto? I thought you were just meme-ing

Danzo: I will be the God of the Shinobi World *sees butterfly* Danzo: HIRUZEN PROTECT MEEEEEEE What a joke.