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Moments 3
Jinpurple
Correct the names. it ruins the story. Also Morgan is a boy use He Him when referring to the child. it cause.confusion. 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Jinpurple
First 100 chapters us great. you will love the story. the story develpment is clear and grammar is correct easy to understand the story flow and conversations of the characters. when you reach the 200 plus chapters thats when story messed up. repeat chapters. repeat paragraph within the same chapter. terrible grammar. missing chapters that you will get lost in the story flow. Dont read this using your coins it will be wasted.
again you cause confusion..it is annoying. Morgan is a Boy. please fix this do proof reading before uploading it😩
"I know." Adrian Zhekova smiles, "I know you definitely can't agree to that. And, it's not appropriate for you to sleep with Morgan, either. She's a big girl now, sleeping with you together, how inconvenient."
Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
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