Author sometimes takes longer nap that why he can't update regularly
As a story, it's not bad. But it has too much detail in every chapter, slow pace , few and undisciplined world background . Mc does too much thinking and almost no dialogues between characters. If author change these problem, the story development will be very good as it's a interesting story.
too much detail and slow pace
Too much thinking and same dialogue from different pov.
Chapters title would've make it better .
what was that.. . why go there if he can't use hide his full strength ... . I don't know why author do this sometimes ??
Too much info dump, plz reduce it
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bro, ur leaving us dry( need 2 chapter/day)
Well, darker than dark story. Too much 💔 Plus it does not have same quality as author other novel ( Saga of Atlantis ).
Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9