I keep this book to look back and remember my mistakes and improve my writing and your review is part of a bigger group that i use to strive forward thank you :]
Haha lol I guess it is pretty crap it's my first story and I haven't touched it other than when I have been incredibly bored. But I agree all the characters are out of character and I didn't know now to make a likable character
Thanks but I don't think I am that good and I am sorry I didn't post many chapters just people from real world found my page and harrased me but it so lost motivation but I will try and make some more chapter for you
Hey I don't understand what you are saying, do you believe that the story is moving to quick and I do agree with the betrayal and minggt edit some members out of the harem
(What he sees)
Lost Son Of Thor and Storm
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
(What he sees)
Lost Son Of Thor and Storm
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
"Please Hephaestus I am sorry forgive I won't ever cheat on you again if you start with me, and I swear on the Styx" Thunder followed her promise and the surprise from the Gods and anger from Ares.
Poor Hephaestus No More
Fantasy · SirZurone
Well the writers are adamant on keeping him young
(Look of Cashier)
Spider-Frame (Spider-man X Harem)
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
It's Peter Parker and in the comics he has pulled a lot of heroines the only thing stopping him was the writers vendetta against him
Peter passed the money over with a wink and a charming smile to the cashier and picked up the bag of clothing, but as he was about to leave he was stopped by the cashiers voice, as he turned back he realised her face was flushed pink.
Spider-Frame (Spider-man X Harem)
Anime & Comics · SirZurone
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original Lost Son Of Thor and Storm
In a moment of passion Storm and Thor create a child but they decided that this child was unwanted and abandoned the infant in a dimension that held beings across the multiverse that were killed and suppressed their powers. The baby would either have to grow up fast to survive of die.18 Chs 1.2k คอลเลกชัน
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Hogwarts New Powerhouse
Born to a wizarding family with a history of magical prowess, Theodore's raw magic often manifests in bursts of electrical energy, causing accidental magical outbursts that leave a trail of minor chaos in his wake. This extraordinary ability has earned him the nickname "Stormrider" among his peers. As he grows at Hogwarts he begins to realize maybe Hogwarts Headmaster isn't as great as everyone thinks.1 Chs 33 คอลเลกชัน
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Poor Hephaestus No More
God of Fire and Hephaestus is seen as a stain to Olympus and is treated like a slave by every god and is mocked by his cheating 'wife' by openly being with his brother Ares and all her lovers. But its time for them all to remember he is the God Of Fire for a reason and he is not to be dealt with disrespect anymore.4 Chs 133 คอลเลกชัน
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Spider-Frame (Spider-man X Harem)
After months of being hated and ostracised Peters life is in ruins. He has broke up with MJ and lost all his family. Someone has decided to give Peter Parker a second chance,.......no a second life as the hero WARFRAME9 Chs 770 คอลเลกชัน
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Devil Inside (Yandere Cheater x OC Marvel Mutant )
A mutant with the power of pyrokinesis is told to have so much power but is afraid everyone he uses it, he is brought in the fold and on the way finds love but what if that love was fake. And what if his power was never just Pyrokinesis but so much more.6 Chs 82 คอลเลกชัน
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The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem
A not so normal guy tries to avoid the constant conflict of superpowered individuals but is pushed into a impossible situation which leads to our hero having serious head aches. (Boy x girl) (Possible lemon/smut if requested) (Slow Updates)18 Chs 1.2k คอลเลกชัน
i understand your frustration but this fic in a au universe but I know it is still being out there but you have to remember that I never want insult anyone, if your going to say this you have to hate all of the harry potter community as they have alot of things that go against the characters exp. drarry, snarry and tomarry there are many more examples that "slap" writers. If i have misunderstood i am sorry if not please rethink and see from my perspective
Lost Son Of Thor and Storm
Anime & Comics · SirZurone