she is very lucky
"Look Miss, if you don't mind I will marry Miss and be the father of the baby you are carrying," said the doctor.
..not continue..
Urban · Vanila_Michelle
poor Ivy
"Miss Ivy's pregnancy is very vulnerable, she could miscarry if her condition still doesn't improve for the next few days," explained the doctor.
..not continue..
Urban · Vanila_Michelle
up to you. i don't care
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
i found too much words oh from chapter 3 to chapter 5
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
too long ummm
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
You should write father using Father not father.
no comma after what for?
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
using dot after before " the punctuation is make confused
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Fantasy · Eternal_bunny
too much words oh in this chapter
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Reincarnation Of Mrs. Chef : Like A Fool
Urban · Vanila_Michelle