And also, there are too many chapters with sex, I think you need to make them smaller, and devote more time to the plot, and add chapters with sex every 10-15 chapters, in order to give a little break from the plot.
Well, first of all, this is good. For a while I couldn't understand why I didn't notice it before, but now I can give an answer, whether it's the cover, or the title, or even the synopsis, they are rather vague and don't attract attention, I started reading this book with great doubt, and generally accidentally, but its content is interesting. Now, if I had written a comment before the end of the arc with the academy, then my review would have been extremely positive, but after the academy, I'm slowly starting to feel disappointed in this book, and I can even tell you why, you focus too much on his positive side, the only bad thing he's done so far is to have fun with the wife of a traitor, that's all, but he keeps talking about blood and chaos and all that, I haven't seen any real cruelty and chaos yet., all I've seen is a bit of manipulation on his part, and also, why would I add his infatuation with a vampire, well,she's not the most ordinary, but she's a vampire, and he's nocturnal, and he's one of the noblest, and he's served by his mother and sister, and he pays attention to the vampire, which is the same as if you had a supermodel girl, but you still pay attention to a little pretty girl whose social status is much lower than yours. In general, the book is good, but after the academy, I personally felt a decline, and it's good that it's free, otherwise it would take me some time to open the chapters.
Use English names for your attacks.
Hahaha, wow how many chapters. Someone wants others to reconsider their conclusions 👍
I can't wait for this battle and what will happen after it.
Well, what is more important, life or some kind of bond? I do not rush to conclusions, I draw conclusions from what is there.
How angry will he be? Well, because as long as what I see is a little small, well, it's okay to kill those who want you dead, but let them go just like that... It's not mercy, it's stupidity.
By the way, Lin also knocked Ashara out, it will be funny when Lin returns to his own world, and it turns out that he has a son.
And who knows, given Lin's character, if he wants to let her go so easily, it's easier for him to either subdue her or kill her.
Well that's more interesting
The Dread of Damned
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