I like it great work but you use the exclamation mark to much every time i read a dialogue i picture them screaming at each other
I like it but you have several errors with the names of the characters if you could fix it that would be awesome, still, it's a good story.
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Hi i like the story bit i want you to know that there is someone publishing this same story in fanfinction. Net i didnt know if that was you but i figured i let you know
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