Harvinder_Virk

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Make with dxd and soul land bhut not make the plot paace thgis slow because it kills the mood fan fics should have faster pace compared to original that my view though and don't make the world travel like a picnic he comes he goes he comes he goes it ruins story you can pick some elements of my power is upgrading everything the pace of this fan fic is ideal so plzzz try to write a little simillar to that well that's my opinion I will read whatever you write though