Lt_Beast

Lt_Beast

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2022-03-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
10 days ago
Posted

Overall, the story is fun if you don't mind some details. For example, contradicting information. For the writing quality, the mistakes could be fixed, but it's still okay if you read from the beginning and know the development. For development, I like how R18, even though in the beginning, was plain. It became more visualised, but it's not the main focus nor is forgotten. But some of the story development is a bit strange from my point of view. And there is a clich when Amy is of royal bloodline, probably the character won't be able to forget her so he will get few more girl who resemble her and maybe in 300-400 will meet again, only to separate again because of her sense of responsibility. As for the information that falls sometimes out of nowhere, or cave man knowing how to do so much with simple explanation. Character design is decent with some growth Stability is good, too, at least when I wrote this. World Background is lacking. You need to read quite a bit to alteast understand what world is this, in the story it's just a mesh of tribal to modern day with fantasy, and when you read to like 120 chapters you start to know this world.

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
11 days ago
Commented

shouldn't this be his first winter?

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
11 days ago
Commented

That's what most people think of him

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
13 days ago
Commented

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After giving their instructions, the three of them left directly.

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
13 days ago
Commented

Brough back straight to bed

Seated next to Enzo, Tia eagerly answered, "It was six months ago, when I personally brought Lord Enzo back to the tribe."

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
13 days ago
Replied to Rozi_Amoh

since they could do what they want without restraints

Enzo's formidable team not only refrained from attacking them but also offered delicious food. Under such a kind master, even as slaves, life wouldn't be too harsh.

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
13 days ago
Commented

Tasting unknown fruits

However, there were still a few plants that surprised him. Besides the already known chili peppers, tomatoes, and pumpkins were also quite good.There was an unknown red berry that tasted pleasantly tart and sweet, lifting Enzo's spirits.

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
13 days ago
Replied to Rozi_Amoh

Well, they said that the average lifespan is over 30, and 20 years old is already 2/3 like Clara said. But Clara considers Tia young

Upon hearing Enzo's inquiry, Tia spat out a wet and sticky meat stick with a drizzle of water at the corner of her mouth. She said proudly, "Amy told me about this. She said you would like it. And doing this can bring you greater pleasure."

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
13 days ago
Commented

Isn't ezro about 20? It was written, then average life expectancy is about over 30

Despite being more than three times Enzo's age with vast experience from traversing the vast barren mountain region.

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs

Lt_Beast
Lt_Beast
14 days ago
Commented

They seem like farmers from future then primitive times

Without hesitation, they all returned to their dwellings, retrieved their tools, and found a vacant area at the edge of the camp, where they followed Enzo's instructions to clear weeds, remove rocks, loosen compacted soil, and sprinkle ash from burnt grass and trees as fertilizer—although they didn't understand the purpose of it all.

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs