Its's interesting so far, powers of mc are 🔥,
it's just that the story is too much focused on nyx that other main canon characters feel extras, give more dimensions to them as you write.
btw gud concept on those powers nd very few mistakes, this def has potential ⚡⚡⚡
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Its's interesting so far, powers of mc are 🔥, it's just that the story is too much focused on nyx that other main canon characters feel extras, give more dimensions to them as you write. btw gud concept on those powers nd very few mistakes, this def has potential ⚡⚡⚡
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