DemonicGodJAMN

WanderingShadow does a great job of going into the worldbuilding of this novel, and although I'm not the biggest fan of Xianxia martial arts novels, I will say that he does a great job of settling the reader in the beginning to make them want to stay. All in all, I'd definitely read this novel had I found it randomly on this site lol

Kek

Alright first things first, this novel has a decent story to start off with, even though the story starts off very mellow. The novel has decent writing quality but still has some grammar and punctuation issues that can easily be fixed. The characters don't seem forced into the story like how many novels will try to do, and the world background is explained slowly much to my liking. The story hasn't been updated in a few days as of writing this but the author seems to have a consistent upload schedule otherwise. Overall, a great read!

The author does a really good job with this novel. The introduction to the main character is phenomenal and keeps the reader on their toes. The plot is diverse and easy to understand, the characters feel like they’re actual humans in each senario, the writing quality and attention to detail is superb and keeps the readers intrigued when delving into the more lore filled areas of the novel. Overall, this book is definitely worth reading, even if you’re new to the genre!

Let's take this from the top, the story of this novel is decently thought out. It follows it's trope well and keeps the clichés to a minimum. However, the writing quality isn't the best. The author uses "And" , "Then" , "So" particularly too much, alongside the mc's name. Although the writing quality can be improved upon greatly, the story is still quite readable and I definitely recommend it to avid fantasy enjoyers.