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2022-02-21 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Chile
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1 years ago
Posted

Writing quality: 5 stars. Very good. Very readable. Story development: 5 stars Good story line Character design: 5 stars Lloyd is the best. Second is Null because he is cool. updating stability: 5 stars 10 chapters a day. 2k words each world background: 7 stars very good world building. very good magical system. unique too.

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2 years ago
Commented

i feel a distubance in the force

"No!" Sam shouted. "That five spike is too strong. Right now, all of them have run out because of their emotional attachment, not thinking things through. That Dalki may be on its last legs, but it also means it's at its strongest right now. I won't let all of you lose your lives!"

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

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2 years ago
Commented

'fixed'

The original plan had been for Sil to return after two years of military service. Once he had gotten 'fixed' Hilston would have proceeded with whatever his plan had been. However, the plan needed adjustment, since there had been no improvement in Sil and then the start of the Civil war had messed things up even further.

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga