Tomatillo

Never mind about the paragraphs I forgot it’s very similar to Chinese translations and some words/phrases/sentences don’t translate very well so good job auther don’t mind me

So far I would put this on par with the twin cities mechanic fanfic novel on here. Great story I hope to see many more chapters. PS. I would like more chapters but you probably have other things to do just know the readers ask including me because we love the story enough to not wait for the next chapter PPS. I don’t know much about any of the characters you are using so if you could write some sort of identifier or or parentheses to keep track of the characters about who they are because I can’t remember. PPPS. It is slightly hard to read because some of the paragraphs are too short or are slightly confusing and causes me to stop reading to understand what you are trying to say.