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he should give Fury the wallet when they meet.

anyone taking bets on her being his daughter from when he was a god of love and lust?

Agreed. An angel wouldn't work, but maybe a celestial diety or something?

Why not just focus on your currently popular fic? I see authors do this and then complain that they don't get as many stones or views because they split their workload and focus.

That sucks. I hoped we were finally past all of the back stories back story to get to the present, and now it's being rewritten. guess I'll check this again in a few months to see how it's changed.

Do what you gotta do. If you're not happy with the way the story is going, it will only make things worse and lead to a resentment to continue the story. Looking forward to it's rewrite.

I believe he was pre-writing far ahead of his public release, probably to start a patreon.

Hindsight doesn't matter. Just because they know now they made a mistake doesn't absolve them of their actions. They may ask for forgiveness but they need to repent for their actions. Most of all, they need to put pressure on ol' Dumbles who was the cause of everything. His greater good disregards the individual, which caused the whole situation in the first place. In your story, he is worse then Voldy. At least Voldy knows and accepts that he is evil. Dumbles keeps marching on thinking he is doing the world a favor no matter how many people fall for HIS greater good.

"In retaliation, Iris retaliated" stood out to me. AI is coming along great, but it's still not perfect.

Love isn't usually logical. It's not a math problem. They can understand his reasoning but still be upset at his abuse because they love him. They are also not fair weather lovers, but fully devoted to Cid. No matter what decision he made, they would continue to follow and love him.

I hope you come back to this story eventually, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Your other story doesn't interest me due to the setting. *shrug*

Issei is way too much of a push over. Not even asking for a reward. Not calling him out on 'controlling Koko' after he's captured when they couldn't control him before. I'm not sure what your plan is long term on his character, but as of right now he feels like a paper tiger. He *is* strong, but he's too easily pushed around. I like him more than the original Issei, but somehow I also dislike him more because he could be so much more.

Issei's character is so inconsistent. Is he a push over, or is he a strong independent dragon. His wishy-washy attitude is honestly off putting at this point.

I like the story so far, looking forward to more chapters.