Kleber_Silva

Autor-san você está bem? Mesmo sem capítulos gostaríamos de saber como você está.

I don't remember which chapter it was, but I saw the author ask if he gave him another cursed technique, my opinion is no, if you want to give him other powers related to shadows and darkness I'm not opposed, I'm against powers that would change the direction of the narrative like the Shadow Monarch's power (that would turn into a zombie collecting story), but powers like Peter Pan's Shadow, JJK's Curtain conjuration I think are good. Obs.: If any part of the comment seems strange, it's google translate's fault, I translated my comment from Brazilian Portuguese to English

1, Two girls has always been my favorite relationship setup for protagonists, as much as I would like a little more character development for Toga, she seems kind of one-dimensional to me.

I found the story very creative, thanks for the chapter

+1

He probably has training weights under his clothes.

Maldivo, você pulou a expansão de domínio, eu estou bem curioso pra saber como é a dele

I really don't think this world destruction thing is bad for the story, even if it's not a relevant part of the plot or maybe it won't even happen, it creates anxiety in the MC and motivates him to not take a back seat in the world of ATLA, I really hope he gets over his fear of world destruction and grows as a person and in character, as for the romance, I usually prefer it when the MC has two girlfriends, but that's my personal preference, above all it becomes tiring to manage the relationships and it feels more like a job than a partnership, and when there's only one girlfriend I feel like the relationship becomes overly cheesy for an adventure fanfic.

Happy Birthday Author-san!👍