why? you don't like drama? do you hate Takumi? why😭
Kira scene
thanks for reading my work, hope you stick around till the end😊
if you're wondering abou what happened to Naruki and Matsuki after meeting Korosaku lee, I think I'll put it in the next chapter, that's what I plan to, but if you think is weird after I release it, please reach out to me so I can ask my editor to help me figure it out
you're right, even I is having a hard time how to brought things up, I'm sorry to disappoint you, it's my first time to really write with the intention of finishing it asap but sometimes I make mistakes because of rush. Please forgive to your useless author.
This work is quite good, reading it is not a waste of time, though I must say there are some uninteresting part like any other nobels out there. The writing style is fine but could be better by making it more gripping. Overall it's good ! Keep up the good work fellows !!
This one gave me goosebumps, as i read your work with imaginations my heart began to throb really fast, I was having a mix feeling of excitement and nervousness. I'm not into horror/thriller but I will not be bias, this book is good, the quality of writing attract my attention, though. there are some mistakes from time to time. It's alluring and exciting as I proceed with the chapters. Hope this would be done well. It's good!!!
Ok here's my two cents h quality of writing and grammar is good, but there's something I am not satisfied, and that is just suddenly dropping the information traits and details in an unattractive way, i think it can be improved more how it was delivered. The story is engaging as I wonder how the story will go. Overall it's good. Keep up the good work, you can do it fellows!
I'm not into BL but I endured and read it, well, what can I ssay, it's good. Here's some of my comments. I'm not into third POV but how the story was delivered is good, the quality of writing and grammar is also satisfying , what only needs to be improved is the quality of feelings of characters, making it more relatable I think will do the trick, whatever you may come up is fine. Keep up the good work
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original The Story About Me and the Girl Who Asked Me Out ver.2
So basically this is the story about our Mc, Matsuki Satoro and this girl Kira Miyoko. Kira asked him to go out with her, but , Matsuki hates the opposite gender. Matsuki accept her confession due to his own selfish and unreasonable reasons and that reason is, he wants to get his revenge on all girls. While Matsuki plans to use her as a stepping stone along the way for his goal, something went incredibly wrong. What could have possibly happened along the way? Will he be able to execute his plan or will someone get in his way? Find out by reading "The Story About Me and the girl who asked me out" [Note from the Author] This is the second version of the story I once wrote as a pantser, now I wrote it with plot, although I don't know if it is better or not, hope you find it enjoyable read despite my lackings Cover is mine36 Chs 20 คอลเลกชัน
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The Story About me and The Girl who Asked me out
4.71
New Version of the story is out please proceed to click the link to read https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-story-about-me-and-the-girl-who-asked-me-out-ver.2_28507228708385305 So basically this is the story about our Mc, Matsuki Satoro and this girl Kira Miyoko. Kira asked him to go out with her, but unexpectedly, Matsuki hates the opposite gender. Though there are few female that he doesn’t dislike. To be more precise he doesn’t like beautiful girl who has the slightest resemblance to “Her”. Matsuki accept her confession due to his own selfish and unreasonable reasons and that reason is, he wants to get his revenge on all girls. While Matsuki plans to use her as a stepping stone along the way for his goal, something went incredibly wrong. What could have possibly happened along the way? Will he be able to execute his plan or will someone get in his way? Find out by reading "The Story About Me and the girl who asked me out" [Note from the Author] “Hello this is just a story I just imagined and wanted to try to write it, but you may not like it though because Mc may look a little dumb or whatsoever but even so I’ll finish it even if on one reads it” [[This story is in revision process]]47 Chs 447 คอลเลกชัน
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Only I Don't Level Up
Alternative Tilte: The Neutral One Auxiliary volumes are Heroine's POV and The rest are the MC's Living my life as usual, I didn't even Expected getting summon into another world, what's more I'm a hero, Yeah I'm a hero but my Status is less than an infant and there's something wrong, My level won't go up. [[This story is on hold, currently focusing on another book]]17 Chs 13 คอลเลกชัน
what do you mean by japanese girl?
The Story About Me and the Girl Who Asked Me Out ver.2
Realistic · sm_yesa