tbh only bad thing about ur novel, is a lot inner monologues, and little actions. its reasonable especially in the first stages due to the nature of ur ff. he cant interact with anyone, and he can't explore new areas since this is a ff, and everything has already been explored.
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Anime & Comics · FangYuan1234
the mc is definitely not comparable to urs, urs is better imo. but the writing quality is better than urs, no offence
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Anime & Comics · FangYuan1234
"Dimensions can be conceptualized as both physical realities and abstract mathematical concepts" quoted from google
The stronger he is, the stronger his sense will become and with his amplification domain, perhaps, sensing such concepts isn't so far off.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
choosing the hardest path is stupid. give this question to anyone. 'what is better, taking a 50km route, or a 20km one to arrive to your home?'
The moment he acquired all the cards, the dagger cut through the player's neck killing him instantly as Yasuo appeared next to him with his hand shining purple and slashed while the body was still standing sending it to the unknown void.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
oh and now that i reread ur comment. yes being good is harder. if u want to be the strongest then u need to find every shortcuts possible. u cant rely on plot armor. u know that in reality those righteous protagonist won't have a journey as smooth as they have in novels. in novels they have plot armor, bc thats what the author want.
The moment he acquired all the cards, the dagger cut through the player's neck killing him instantly as Yasuo appeared next to him with his hand shining purple and slashed while the body was still standing sending it to the unknown void.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
no not at all. that logic doesn't work. if we take two people with the same strength levels (they had a lot of fights before and they always ended with a draw), but one of them suddenly doesn't want to go back on any of his promises, who u think is gonna win if they were to fight again? the one who doesn't go back on his promise? or a draw again. i can keep on giving examples but i think my point is already proved with this one. someone who goes back on his promises has more tools than one who doesn't. strength isnt directly related to this topic. UNLESS u are invincible then u will need any and every tool u can find and master.
The moment he acquired all the cards, the dagger cut through the player's neck killing him instantly as Yasuo appeared next to him with his hand shining purple and slashed while the body was still standing sending it to the unknown void.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
and dimensions are concepts too
The stronger he is, the stronger his sense will become and with his amplification domain, perhaps, sensing such concepts isn't so far off.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
they are concepts...
The stronger he is, the stronger his sense will become and with his amplification domain, perhaps, sensing such concepts isn't so far off.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
not going back on your words is just so limiting.
The moment he acquired all the cards, the dagger cut through the player's neck killing him instantly as Yasuo appeared next to him with his hand shining purple and slashed while the body was still standing sending it to the unknown void.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
why always smiling... so weird
He landed silently and elegantly with a tranquil smile on his face. he was wearing a white long-sleeved shirt with black pants and black combat boots.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
whats a ROB
There was no extraordinary experience or a scary abyss of darkness, I just felt it directly in the blink of an eye, I'm in the body of a baby, it's obliviously easy to notice, that lead me to start crying so that I can breathe or more like screaming.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
u seem very against the idea of immortality, to the point of getting negative emotions when u see people pursuing it
I guess it's a little bit understandable if they don't have that kind of passion that'll drive them for eternity, still think they are losers though.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
hmm, he meant 'making anyone u fear for, immortal' . but if every loved one will have kid then that creates a problem ig. and u seem like one of the types that forget about adaptation, an immortal will mentally adapt to immortality. and the existence is most likely never ending, so u will never run out of things to do, cuz existence will offer infinite things to do, and u to ur imagination
It makes me wonder how those protagonists that are scared of immortality think, do they realize that it will take at least billions of years to explore our universe and know all there is to know about it, let alone the multiverse if it even exists.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
nah an eternity serving other people is mad crazy
It makes me wonder how those protagonists that are scared of immortality think, do they realize that it will take at least billions of years to explore our universe and know all there is to know about it, let alone the multiverse if it even exists.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
fr but ppl like to ignore this. most of them have a dramatic thinking process: "my son will die, ill watch everyone die." there re other types too
It makes me wonder how those protagonists that are scared of immortality think, do they realize that it will take at least billions of years to explore our universe and know all there is to know about it, let alone the multiverse if it even exists.
Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
really i dont want to appear like a nerd but this can be viewed from different perspectives so there isn't an objective truth whether nature is kind or not, the result when pondering abt this varies with the angle u viewed it from
"experience the wrath of mother nature."
Anime & Comics · InstaMoist
unkind as in.. nature will never give special treatments to, it doesn't care abt ur life and death
"experience the wrath of mother nature."
Anime & Comics · InstaMoist
that started to happen before the system was even a thing in this novel, whether it be because the author become lazy after he gathered enough audience, or bc he simply become bored of writing, this novel's quality has clearly dropped, and it majorly doesn't have to do with the system
Deep within, he couldn't help but wonder if this was how long his journey was going to last. He clenched his fist, not willing to accept it! He knew he was weak! That's why he had been using other people to handle urgent matters that could threaten him.
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
yours*. his novel, Danmachi - Depthless hunger
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Danmachi - Depthless Hunger
Anime & Comics · FangYuan1234