im 10 chapters in and the level of cringe hurts me. let's list out the things that give me the urge to wretch while reading. MC has white hair(including the whole family apparently) MC is a cuckold MC has a Katana named Katara(double whammy) The opening scene has 'im a very badass' scene. Shouts the name of there attacks outloud(actually doesn't bother me to much but I know it bothers a lot of other people) What the author could do make it worse. Name your MC or any character some shitty name like zero, void, hero.(a parent doesn't look at their child and think, "yes you look like a zero to me.") Make references to external media.(Naruto and Marvel seem to be the biggest offenders) Like I've watched maybe 30 episodes of the first Naruto series and I know shit. so please don't call magic eye powers what ever the hell Naruto calls them. I could continue but I'm losing steam from my Lil rant and would rather continue reading for now. Overall don't try and show us how badass your character is. Just let the story progress normally, their badass-ness will show over time. Actions over words or some shit like that.
those 'IQ' score give me mental anguish
a decent face slapper for those who like face slappers. .
how do normal lords rank up? they would have to kill thousands of tierless monster before they can rank up if it took Michael several tier 2 monsters
human world?
"It's called the Phantasmal Storm," Marcus replied. "It's a rare occurrence that happens once every few years. During the storm, the magical properties of the Forest of Hallucinations will overflow and the veil between the human world and the demon world is weakened, and demons are more likely to cross over into our world."
Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
'Sh*t!' I couldn't help but drop this idea for now. 'One thousand coins? Just to view the list?! What will it cost me to listen to one recording then? Couple thousands, or even ten thousand coins? That's a sh*t load of coins for me right now!'
I Only Wanted A Class In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · ranmaro
my dude I read that book like 8 months ago, I don't even know what your talking about?
'Sh*t!' I couldn't help but drop this idea for now. 'One thousand coins? Just to view the list?! What will it cost me to listen to one recording then? Couple thousands, or even ten thousand coins? That's a sh*t load of coins for me right now!'
I Only Wanted A Class In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · ranmaro
Authors is really showing his incompetence. Also why cant we have a linear story. having it backtracking like this only makes the story feel like it's been dragged on.
kinda wanna drop the book but I'll give the author a chance.
I thought his name was Michael Johnson? also wasn't he killed in a mall by some rando psycho?
Netori King: I Will NTR Everyone!
Fantasy · Pervert_Human