Gerzy_Sensei

Gerzy_Sensei

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2021-12-02 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
10 months ago
Commented

lol from emotional to .... haha

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Replied to

then send it to me, I'll use that book to smash your head, to reduce some toxic prople like you.

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The Conquerors Path

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Commented

I hope there is no CCTV on the hallway haha

After saying that, Shio stopped in her steps and faced me. Taking advantage that there was still no one around us, she swiftly sneaked in a kiss on my lips, conveying what she just uttered.

Stealing Spree

Stealing Spree

Urban · Dyrem

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Posted

I will leave my rate here. This novel is really good the story is good, I can't really say anything bad except for the grammar, and the update. pls, author, before you wrote a new novel finish your first work first there are a lot of unfinished novels on this platform please don't add yourself to them. also, upgrade your +18 scene and make your own work, it's true that as long as no one caught you copying other work is fine. still, create your own scene and world. You can have ideas on them but don't just copy and edit them if you are caught you might get into jail for plagiarism. FYI you have lots of readers here for sure they read lots of r18 novels where you copied from.

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Commented

we know

(A/N: The poem does not belong to me)

The Conquerors Path

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Commented

It should be "Don't worry mom, I will fill the hole father left. And splash some white stuff on your weathering flower" so that your readers wont say cringe.

"Don't worry Grace, I am there for you, I will of course look after you, I will make sure that your are the most happiest woman in the world, I promise you that"

The Conquerors Path

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Commented

Don't tell me this is also a copy from another novel, the description of his mother changes from blonde to brown hair. just wow

Right now I had just entered the streets, right beside me stood a woman with brown hair and eye's, she was dressed in a blue one piece dress with a necklace on her neck, the woman seems to reek with gentleness and grace

The Conquerors Path

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Commented

The Mc is too cringe The Author is too Cringe The Reader is too Cringe The world is too Cringe. The Humans are too Cringe Cringe Cringe Cringe

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The Conquerors Path

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Commented

This idiot keep saying plot armor, if the mc died it will be the end of the story. I cant understand this idiots. Sigh,

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The Conquerors Path

The Conquerors Path

Fantasy · Chaosking

Gerzy_Sensei
Gerzy_Sensei
2 years ago
Replied to AkaiRyuugamine

True Hero save the Craving Mother.