i don't why but i don't like how they talk i feel that they are fake like reciting a textbook also you don't to say every persons's name when they are talking it feels off-putting
Kaito, known for his loyalty to his friends, spoke up. "Leila, your words resonate deeply. Kindness and compassion are often overlooked in a world driven by ambition and competition. But it's in moments like these, when we face adversity together, that we truly see the strength and unity within our community."
Sci-fi · LordGold556
this chapter and the previous chapter should swap numbers this should be no.3 and the previous no.4
Amazing world building 👏👏ps: i liked the new names of the months
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8. Hakeem Ahmed <Zone 134>
Fantasy · Magecrafter
At that moment, Lisa officially died.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
wasn't it 3/3
- Life Force: 2/2
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Jake is the new MC
One thing was certain, though: all four girls had deep feelings for Jake.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
i hoped it wouldn't be like this
All along… it had been Lisa!
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Thank you Author for not making the MC lie to everyone for no reason
"Lisa, there's something I have to tell you." This was the best option. I could tell.
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Jayce's mind whirled with confusion and disbelief. Trembling fingers hastily checked the date, his eyes widening as he read the glaring numbers—1st July 2050. A gasp escaped his lips, reverberating through the empty room. It was a revelation that struck shock into the depths of his soul—he had truly traveled back in time, a decade into the past.
Chef in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · leeroycgna