You do you I say use OG author as a framework and change/create plot points as necessary
Sorry but I think you have the wrong number? Your ex should be two stories down.
I don’t believe there’s a mention of Solomon in the SCP wiki so this is most likely fanfic only. From what I understand Solomon was a vary powerful reality bender connected to the SCP Foundation before being killed for some reason. Note: the foundation isn’t one to kill needlessly so Solomon was likely hostile before his death and was designated to be to dangerous to be left alive similar to SCP: 096
The systems name, apparently the author is giving it an in universe reason for existing
Not sure there taking a break at the moment so it’s probably going to be a bit
Even if you don’t like more light hearted stories like this I’d still recommend reading this one sense while it depends on the fandom, overall story’s like this are very rare sense you lessen the familiarity of the world (which is why this type of story is more common in fiction like Naruto sense they still got the great ninja wars as a focal point) this generally means you can take the story into multiple directions you otherwise couldn’t while also exploring the world in a unique way. P.S. Authors got balls and I’m looking forward to how this story develops
Seems to have worked themselves out so a break is understandable so I’d say check periodically for when they come back
When I say collar I’m talking about the shirt collar if you’re wondering think a cross between blues outfit and the white team rocket executive uniform
The drawing itself is 10/10 but I can’t help but feel it doesn’t fit in Pokémon (to anime boy) while it does fit the author’s description of the mc ‘black hair, red eyes and white clothes’ it doesn’t really have any distinctive features that most gym leaders and above have. I’d say add a little more color to the clothes keep white as the main color but add some black and light blue as supporting colors ((just look at Cynthia mainly black with bit of silver and yellow) the black to help show there pseudo twin dynamic while the blue is a nod to his favorite Pokémon being shiny umbreon) I’d say tighten up the clothes and add a black collar to make his red eyes more prominent, light blue shoes and maybe a bracelet on one wrist and a black belt he keeps his poke balls on
like the system you gave the mc it’s not something I see outside of say undertale fanfics the only nock I can really give is how everything BUT physical progress is made, for this chapter you used it to enhance the muscles which was clearly affected by the load as it took away muscle exhaustion which just seems clunky and forced. I know you haven’t had time to explain how the system works in detail but from the information I got from the chapter if he loaded a save from his childhood when he was a adult he’d keep his adult form. Thanks for the chapter
MHA: Save And Load System, Becoming All Might's Perfect Successor!
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