now it's turning somewhat good story
I had to ensure that Alya was kidnapped by the djinns and promptly saved by Liam. Of course, Irene had to be there, but I already had a foolproof plan for her.
Fantasy · avbutt
first couple of chapters more or less okay for characters building but now it's completely bullsh##
absolute stupidity for sake of storytelling
The more focused Liam is, the more powerful he is, and the less work I must do!
Fantasy · avbutt
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Fantasy · avbutt
Single female lead [img=recommend]
Rather than brave or strong it's simply childlike stupidity
'I don't care at all; I will never bow.' Ezra thought.
Fantasy · NTNova
'As long as they don't turn against me, I'll destroy anything that tries to hurt even a hair on them.'
Fantasy · NTNova
Kind of forcefully illogical
'No, no time to get overcome with feelings, remember that it was people you cared about that killed you.' He to himself.
Fantasy · NTNova
can you use the name? isn't the name already trademarked?
Path of the Extra
Fantasy · Crypthh