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I hope it was constructive and not upsetting! I loved this work and will absolutely follow anything else you write. This was excellent author, particularly considering it was your first work in English. Thank you so much!

Pros: - This story is so much fun. Quick-paced and full of sly humor, it keeps you going to the next chapter. - Characters are very well realized, flawed, and interesting - Though there are a lot of clichés, the author plays with enough expectations to keep things interesting and surprising Cons: - This is a great story that is in desperate need of an editor. If you are easily distracted by spelling or grammar mistakes, you need to adjust your expectations or walk away. - Though I appreciate the fast pace, there are definitely some plot holes and some events that should have been fleshed out a bit more Overall, I highly recommend this to anyone who has a good sense of humor and a sense of the ridiculous. I smiled through most of this book and found myself obsessively moving to the next chapter. Though the story isn't perfect, you won't regret picking it up!