Alright! The story is good, I don't think the grammatical error is a big deal since the author isn't a native speaker. Keep doing what you are doing.
Quite interesting story tbh. maybe you should check it, or must check it! The writing is quite... good. Keep writing dude, hope people read this gem.
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Remove the "ROAR".
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This is supposed to be her. I try to do my best
Tika was astonished. She grabbed Jung by the arm and got them far away from the group.
Hueyyad
War · SchizoReader
you know, i did try to make this as an interactive story game (but i stopped). you actually can see the state of my mind.
Why are you laughing at such name? Insulting the native name from the people of china!? I swear i will crush you down if i ever see you. Don't ever laugh at china again!!
"The name's Su Yang," he responded.
Dual Cultivation
Eastern · MyLittleBrother
It's actually a good novel. Nice writing, some words probably need to be latinized. I don't know anything about chinese words, so it'll be helpful for you to write the latinized words too. Development is actually crazy. It went from 0-10 in a second. Some of her act is actually an offendable crime, which is quite funny and downer for me at the same time. 10/10 mindblowingly insane mc. she need help, get her to a nearby therapist/hospital for the insane.
Good book, lot of sexyyy. Write more, i love your book. Me, representing the country India love your literature, and the way you represented the story. However there could be something that you can fix, especially with the words..
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original Hueyyad
Jung, a journalist living in Hellsum, will go through the hardship, trying to survive in the battle zone. A battle zone between two major powers on a big single continent. The highly militarised Duo Nagari on the east, and the advanced technological powerhouse of Hellsum on the west. From here they will see a man who is being shaped by the war, a journalist turned soldier.6 Chs 10 คอลเลกชัน
- original
A Witch Hunt
A high sorceress of the sorcerers' guild, kidnapped by people who seek her knowledge of a certain someone. An elf who is capable to create portal through space and time.4 Chs 0 คอลเลกชัน
- original
Demens
เสร็จสมบูรณ์
Nazeir is a mercenary, and a mutant called 'inquisitor'. He is returning from a long journey. When he was on his way back, he could feel something tense in the air. The Sorcerers have been found mining a dangerous crystal which could spread diseases, even destroy the entire world. The story is also available on RoyalRoad.35 Chs 12 คอลเลกชัน
This is the first time since I use WebNovel that i read a writing that deserve a five star. Good use of punctuation, hidden gem beneath the pile of papers.
Falling for a Ferocious Beast
Fantasy · CREATIVE_SPACE