I really like how this paragraph was written! I enjoy the pacing and wording used in this novel a lot O.O might take some pointers
He released them from the invisible dark bands of superiority. The gruelling power finally gave them the luxury of breathing once more. It felt like they'd been hauled into the fiery engine of a hot air balloon for about three hours.
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I am on it :)
This is public, not for personal use
thank you! planning to keep updating even if a bit sporadic currently
goodnight you
Is this where you are at XD?
Thank you BlackRose, I Appreciate it. I know I am unreliable with releasing chapters, but I do have 3 new chapters coming throughout tonight and tomorrow. might just release them all at once, since the wait has been long.
Thank you for the lovely Review, I really appreciate you enjoying the story. I hope the story will continue to be enjoyed, though it may sometimes become a bit darker. Will get going on finishing and uploading new chapters soon as thanks for the encouragement.
Thank you for the Review Helmi_Teronen, really appreciate the support for the story. I will make sure to keep updating, I know it has been a while.
I started this a couple of days ago and got to read several chapters. I am impressed by the level of writing quality. The writer has perfect word plays and there are barely any grammar issues. The flow is good, and it is easy to figure out which POV the reader is currently reading. This is worth trying out!! There are also plenty of chapters so the writer is serious about publishing which is a significant plus for me.
My boyfriend can control the darkness
Fantasy · funkiller_562