This story was interesting because Jane got a second chance in life to unite with her loved ones & take revenge against the scheming antagonists..But she wasted it by her foolishness when she surrendered to the enemy with no plan of escape or rescue..To get a third chance in life is RIDICULOUS..Its unfair how all other characters life will go to square one just to give a 3rd chance to Jane..All the beautiful moments in the books till now become meaningless..Other love stories beside Jane Nathan became unnecessary..
Bam-Bam smiled faintly and nodded. "Yes, Master. This is your last chance to make things right for both of you. Within these twelve days, you have to make him fall in love with you again."
100 Days to Seduce the Devil
Urban · ellezar_g
This is so disappointing.. Isn't Jane a famous & smart assassin? Shouldn't she be one step ahead of her enemies? How can she enter the enemy's premises with no preparation & no plans ...Did Jane foolishly believe Monica will let Ethan go after she surrendered? It is expected Monica will scheme to use & harm Ethan..still she did nothing & planned to do nothing..if she had died atleast while fighting would have been satisfying.. To be fooled by Monica twice in this story makes Jane weak & pathetic protagonist
Both Vincent and Tatsumi screamed her name.
100 Days to Seduce the Devil
Urban · ellezar_g
This chapter didn't have the desired effect as it is similar to what happened with Edna...It was so predictable ...
It is good that hè got to experience now how Priscella felt on seeing him with Cassidy while they were still married...this will make him realise his mistake & repent genuinely..
"I am fine," Edmund replied, pulling his eyes away from the window and following Edgar to the dining room. He would deal with his mother in the morning if she was still in town. What bothered him now was watching his ex-wife be with another man. It wasn't something he ever thought would upset him since he had wanted her to move on and be happy.
The Duke's Masked Wife
History · Violet_167
Wasn't corrupted soul necessary for soul transfer....if not why did he wait till now to obtain it after soul maturation.. Confusing plotsx
That was until Logan stated menacingly, "I was making it easy for you, but if you want to die by burning in fire, then so be it."
Garden Of Poison
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Stupidest villain
Dante took a step forward, coming to stand directly in front of the cell, and he said, "I would have called it naive of you to hunt a princess, but deliberately going after her, knowing she was my sister and someone who has now become someone of great importance in Hell, you must have lost many screws to not understand what you were up against."
Garden Of Poison
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Cunning Devil
"Oh, well, I thought the old woman was right. I should give in for the sake of fostering a good relationship with my many future grandchildren. It would be best to get along with everyone, isn't that so?" Viktor's expression remained mostly unchanged, except for his eyebrows, which arched a little higher.
Garden Of Poison
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Makes me question whether Nathaniel truly loved Layla
"I am sorry about Layla," Emily expressed sympathy for her friend's death, knowing she didn't deserve it. However, she continued, "But your emotions are misplaced out of frustration. You should know better. She deserves to be remembered and not replaced."
Garden Of Poison
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Proof that he deserve most stupid & ignorant archdemon award
"My father never touched Layla, nor did he even breathe near her. He did send Celeste to end her swiftly as retaliation for you stealing what belonged to him. But Celeste spared her," Raylen stated, his darkened eyes locked on Nathaniel as they stared at each other. "You brought death upon her soul first by bonding with her. You are an archdemon, and only those of strong blood can handle your blood within them. You forced the bonding, and she eventually fell ill, something you should have known would happen. Then, you stole and fed her poison with your own hands."
Garden Of Poison
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Sweet & simple story.. But unlike other novels from this author this story was rushed & hence less engaging..Loved every characters but there was no strong antagonists
The Forgotten Princess Rose
History · Violet_167