Welp man cooked…every character to congratulation. Jk tho this hit hard I thought it’s was a regular suicide mission but author said NAH we making this maximum orphans emotional damage suicide mission. Mad respect for having enough time to make this many characters with their own quirks including man eating and sadist, have group dynamics made in like 3 chapters and then send them to (most probably) god….love the writing have a good one.
"She..." Nia wipes her nose, turning to Ryua. She trembles. "Ryua isn't human. The papers we found said her past was faked and she... she was born out of an egg. T-They think her parents are monsters..." Nia struggles to say, sobbing harder.
A World Unwritten
Fantasy · QTV
I’m responding because you asked if this lacks emotion, I’m just ganna say I’m no writer nor do I have an idea of what I’m rughttt but in my opinion it’s not that it’s lacking emotions it’s just that this feels a bit sudden it’s out of the blue these two have to face their trauma. I know we got foreshadowing for kale and her both but I’m not sure that was enough build up. Regardless I’m still love the way it’s going showing more of what’s kale kales background and fights are still hype thanks for the chapter
The creature tilts its head, its expression devoid of a smile. "This is a memory you managed to seal away deep in your subconscious," Standing up, it looks at Kael with interest. "You're impressive. Even I am unable to completely seal a memory to the point where I can't recognize its essence. You seem to remember the young girl crying but sealed away everything past that. Why is that?" it wonders aloud.
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Fantasy · QTV
"Um... you two can fight all you want, I'm out of here," Kael mumbles as he turns around and starts sprinting. 'There's at least a couple hundred, there's no way we can fight them.'
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Fantasy · QTV
Kael enjoying his picnic in the forest
Kael sighs, looking around the never-ending dead forest. 'How many days has it been now? Maybe five days? Fuck, I don't know.'
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Fantasy · QTV
"Hmhmhmhmhm~ How adorable," a hand cups her cheek from behind. No reaction? Why would she? She knows that voice well enough. In the reflection of the mirror, she sees her: one hazel eye and one vibrant green, hazel hair that falls down her back. Have you guessed? Here's a clue. She's a 'devil' to someone. "I'm sorry for breaking in, but I just couldn't help myself," she hums in Isadora's ear. To no surprise, Isadora simply blinks blankly.
A World Unwritten
Fantasy · QTV
That would be awesome, the character shenanigans is already hilarious but can we also get a auxiliary chapter character, images or just descriptions
As a bonus, let me know your favorite characters or anyone you'd like to see more of. If you want any data about the characters, feel free to ask. And for those of you who've read my other novel, don't worry—I haven't given up on it. It takes just as much effort as this story, and I'm doing my best to write for you all.
A World Unwritten
Fantasy · QTV
I wanna honestly thank you for writing this story and making it free for everyone to enjoy. Not that making other wise would be unfair and in all honesty I really think it’s more unfair for you. But enough sappy stuff I just wanted to let you know your writing is amazing you, make every character feel alive and fun. World building fantastic as well, the only complaint I might have is that there’s so many different characters that I so diverse I just sometimes forget how they look. So I just kinda know how they main people look in my head but that’s whatever. Your doing great how you have a good one
As a bonus, let me know your favorite characters or anyone you'd like to see more of. If you want any data about the characters, feel free to ask. And for those of you who've read my other novel, don't worry—I haven't given up on it. It takes just as much effort as this story, and I'm doing my best to write for you all.
A World Unwritten
Fantasy · QTV
Yes
Love how it started, it’s a journey to find what is was to be human I like the pacing for right now and how the main character is trying to go about his problems. Just hope there will be more thx for writing
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original Danmachi: The Orphaned Heir of blood
*there are some dark elements to the story so keep tha in mind before reading the FF* This is the story of a boy who was stripped of his world and brought to a new yet familiar one. once a story now his reality lets see if he can realize his dream or...die trying *I do not own danamchi nor the story only the Mc and Oc's* *I do not own the cover art*9 Chs 339 คอลเลกชัน
This whole book feels like it had black Betty blasting as a song in the background And I’m enjoying the hell out of it.
My Hero Academia: Restless Gambler
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