Robert_Hart_8185

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2021-08-14 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
8 days ago
Commented

too much explaining. a real person would not be thinking about all these things in this situation. he's eager for power he would either attack or find a easier opponent.

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
2 months ago
Commented

it's almost the new year. is this book going to be updated any more or is it abandoned?

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
3 months ago
Replied to Fiaran

not 3 rewards. the top 3 will be rewarded is what she said

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
3 months ago
Commented

ok so the people that they have to test with that are not part of a company should not be stronger than them because they have no arcana technique. and if they are stronger it should not be by much.

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
5 months ago
Replied to Robert_Hart_8185

I agree the stockpiling is and important part of the story but we don't need to hear about every single item. to many writers nowadays feel the need to over explain everything. explanations or good but at a certain point it becomes monotonous and you lose the audience you are trying to draw in. no single part of a story should take that many chapters.

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
5 months ago
Commented

I like the story so far but almost 20 chapters in and nothing interesting has happened. it's a bit slow

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
8 months ago
Commented

interesting system but the story is slow and boring as all that happens is getting points and cultivating.

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
8 months ago
Commented

Ok. His mask was destroyed in the fight but it's still hiding his grimace? and we get it already. everything and everyone is enigmatic.

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
8 months ago
Commented

I think it's because he has 4 self geno cores.

Robert_Hart_8185
Robert_Hart_8185
9 months ago
Commented

God story but the rambling explanations are getting annoying and slowing down the story. If this continues I will stop reading.