Robert_Hart_8185

too much explaining. a real person would not be thinking about all these things in this situation. he's eager for power he would either attack or find a easier opponent.

it's almost the new year. is this book going to be updated any more or is it abandoned?

not 3 rewards. the top 3 will be rewarded is what she said

ok so the people that they have to test with that are not part of a company should not be stronger than them because they have no arcana technique. and if they are stronger it should not be by much.

I agree the stockpiling is and important part of the story but we don't need to hear about every single item. to many writers nowadays feel the need to over explain everything. explanations or good but at a certain point it becomes monotonous and you lose the audience you are trying to draw in. no single part of a story should take that many chapters.

I like the story so far but almost 20 chapters in and nothing interesting has happened. it's a bit slow

interesting system but the story is slow and boring as all that happens is getting points and cultivating.

Ok. His mask was destroyed in the fight but it's still hiding his grimace? and we get it already. everything and everyone is enigmatic.

I think it's because he has 4 self geno cores.

God story but the rambling explanations are getting annoying and slowing down the story. If this continues I will stop reading.