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yoganksri_
13 hours ago
Posted

lovely story so far. the concept is good and the writing is good too. a few grammatical errors but nothing that makes it unbearable. the direction of itachi's subplot is interesting imo.

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yoganksri_
1 days ago
Posted

liked the story. definitely very funny but solid take on uchiha. laughed a lot reading it but also glad that story is not purely crack fic and progresses well. very rare to see shisui take the stance he took. worth reading

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yoganksri_
2 days ago
Replied to CRUZEN

you're probably right. though I want him to die so bad. no need to try and maintain canon by keeping him alive.

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yoganksri_
6 days ago
Commented

it has been 2 years since the war and he's still 11 yr?

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yoganksri_
9 days ago
Commented

did the evolution happen in both eyes or just his left eye?

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yoganksri_
9 days ago
Commented

who exactly is old man?? everyone keeps saying old man old man. Rather than writing old man why don't u use pronouns or names. old man wants this old man wants that. this one thing makes the chapters bad imo.

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yoganksri_
13 days ago
Commented

please avoid these bullshits. even if it is said as a joke.

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