Marcazalol_69

Marcazalol_69

LV 13
2021-08-09 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Lebanon
ป้าย 8

Moments 148
Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
18 days ago
Commented

soo is it dropped ?

Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
21 days ago
Commented

If you have a vision, you should keep him as he is, but if you want to add more in the future, you shouldn't do time skip so as to not confuse us and olso keep the pov of the characters you want to focus on and lessen the one who aren't relevant to the story plus do not add a lot of them or you will run out of ideas fast.

Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
1 months ago
Replied to Daoist_Kalyug

i don't think it is he just working on his other novel

Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
2 months ago
Commented

you alive?

Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
5 months ago
Replied to Rockeryord1

You could use chat gpt to fix the grammar and have better frazing. But do remember it is an AI, so it may not include all of your ideas, so you should double-check.

Marcazalol_69
Marcazalol_69
5 months ago
Commented

can you fix your grammar.The story is good, but the grammar is all over the place.