I am ok with an mc with a lot of hatred but hatred needs a cause,why does he hate them so much?
"Vampires! I LOATHE them. Demi humans, I DESPISE them. Everything that is wrong with the world is because of YOU despicable vermin... Trolling the shadows of the earth like the cockroaches that you are!"
WEREWOLF BLOODLINE: Vengeful Rise Of The Immortal Hunter
Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
bruh can he just get out
more pls
hm incorporating the whole sayan clan here is weird. the Ayaan civilization would never bow before thanks nor is Thanos powerful enough for that. the mc should have just been unique and the only sayan
lol o have seen a lot of reasons for nerfs in stories ,,but this is the most meh lol it's like you didn't even try to hide that you are nerfing him
Over the years, I'd uncovered several of its secrets. Chief among them was its ability to seal my cultivation. From what I could deduce, I had been born with immense cultivation already, but the necklace had locked it away, forcing me to start from the very bottom. This wasn't a disadvantage; it allowed me to fully develop and refine the potential of each realm.
The Saiyan In The Cultivation World.
Anime & Comics · itachi1010
iIthink this should be in a passive skill category , does t really look like a stat
Combat Proficiency: 5
A new life(Marvel&DC)
Movies · Anhilator
no Mattar what type of fantasy you want t write,your story has to have some logic at least, bruh if games when they firststarted appearing weren't that profitable how come the most sold console is the PS2??
"Games?" My interlocutor was surprised once again. "As far as I know, this is far from a profitable business. And what games has your company produced?"
A new life(Marvel&DC)
Movies · Anhilator
but what's the point of doing this to the planet,or even mentioning it? it changes nothing and it just worsens the good feeling we might have about the story
[A/N: Please, don't start questioning how gravitational pull or the climate might be affected. Just assume that some cosmic magic makes everything function normally.]
A new life(Marvel&DC)
Movies · Anhilator
the dialogue feels weird
if we assume Smallville as canon than when he leaves for metropolis permanently he can already fly
Man Of Steel, Shield Of Ice
TV · Ashish_Bisht_6746