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I just thought, if he knows the word energy, he will be able to do many things, because you know, the world is made of atoms, he will turn coal into diamonds with little effort, send lightning to himself first to level up, and then to enemies and so on

I would just like to point out that Brom's prophecy goes something like this: you will fail at everything except 1 thing, and that thing will make up for all your future and past failures. that thing is the saphira egg that he managed to get

will he have feelings for someone? will the oracle see his runes? or maybe he will be able to see the runes of others through the eye of an observer?

no problem, we understand that life is getting in the way of your writing, well at least I am

good, but dialogues shorten the overall content of the chapter, so 2/10 information in this chapter and overall plot, I think, conversation 9/10, because the chapter is short

I don't really like this flaw, but if you want it's your fanfic, and if he has a debt how does he repay it, or maybe they order him to do something and he does it like a slave of debt until it drops to 0, the harder, longer, more complex the request/task the more percentage he loses? and if he reversed this flaw how will you handle it? I'm interested, or maybe you'll be the next author who ended up at the beginning of the novel

flaw hmm, all flaws in the novel are reasonable, the shadow cannot lie and always responds, you have twice as much physical fitness, you eat twice as much, your soul is the sun, the sun burns after all, so since he is an observer, he should have problems showing himself, if you do not pay attention to him, he easily becomes the background, but if he gives someone a memory, this flaw has no effect on that person because he is directly involved, just like he did not know in the nightmare that he was being observed until the observer got involved, through the wheat field

time skips are fine, just don't do outrageous things like: ahh there was a big fight last week and somehow the stats jumped to EX

it's addictive, and remember there is a pallum which has very powerful healing magic in the original Dianth Ceht or something like that

when it comes to blocking the status thief