DaoistTryu8z

I like this novel, the pace of the story development, the characters especially the cute kids. I like how independent the FL is but I find that she sometimes needlessly puts herself in danger. She insists on going alone when she's got enough support to back her up. It's partly heroic but also partly self-centered in the sense that she doesn't seem to appreciate how important her safety is to her loved ones and how much they suffer because of this. This is the only part that annoys me. Otherwise, I like the semi‐slow pace of the story, how the challenges and new characters come up, and how all the details are woven together.

There were a lot of gaps or jumps in the plot. Story could have unfolded in a better way with more detail of events. For example, a character announces they would do something but we don't actually see it happening. We only learn about the results of the event. This is nice to do sometimes but not as frequently as it occurred in this story. There could also be more character development. It would've been nice to get to know them better instead of this merely skin-deep characterization. The drawings started out ok but deteriorated at the latter chapters. Over-all, you could skip this one 😅 Though I ended up finishing it coz I wanted to know the ending. However, the read wasn't as enjoyable.